From 41d45a76ff3b056afa96ebd43be17644c9019f20 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: William <William@willy.club>
Date: Tue, 2 May 2023 10:34:54 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Reread

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 <p><blockquote>More than just willies! Some of the time.</blockquote></p>
 
-<p>Welcome to my webserver! Your bits have passed through the pipes that make up the internet all the way to my laptop located in Southern Norway, Kristiansand.</p>
+<p>Welcome to my webserver! Your bits have traveled through the pipes that make up the internet all the way to my laptop situated in Southern Norway, Kristiansand.</p>
 
-
-<p>Isn't she beautiful? Released in 2008 is a ThinkPad R400 running <a href="//libreboot.org">Libreboot</a> equipped with:</p>
+<p>Isn't she beautiful? Released in 2008 is a ThinkPad R400 that's been <a href="//libreboot.org">librebooted</a> and equipped with:</p>
 
 <ul>
-	<li>Intel Core2 Duo P8700 2x@ 2.53GHz</li>
+	<li>Intel Core2 Duo P8700 2x@2.53GHz</li>
 	<li>8 Gigabytes of dedotaded wam</li>
-	<li>Dual 480GB SSD's in ZFS mirror</li>
+	<li>Dual 480GB SSD in ZFS mirror</li>
 </ul>
 
 <p><img src="<?=url('/img/laptop.jpg')?>" alt=""></p>
 
 <h2>Now, where would you like to go?</h2>
 
-<p>The server serves some services; couple being accessible through here.</p>
+<p>The server serves some services; couple being publicly accessible.</p>
 
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 <h2>Other than that?</h2>
 
-<p>Some resources to things that I find interesting to fill out the rest of the page.</p>
+<p>Here are some things that I find interesting.</p>
 
 <h3>Collapse</h3>
 
-<p>Recently I have taken great interest in the potential for near-term or rather the currently ongoing civilizational collapse, or to put it more bluntly; doomscrolling, and it has overshadowed many of my other interests.</p>
+<p>Recently I have taken great interest in the potential for near-term civilizational collapse, or to put it more bluntly; doomscrolling, and it has overshadowed many of my other interests.</p>
 
-<p>Here are some resources. Be redicalized.</p>
+<p>Here are some resources. Get redicalized.</p>
 
 <ul>
 	<li>Sid Smith - <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5WPB2u8EzL8">How to Enjoy the End of the World</a><br>- Presentation about the predicament.</li>
 	<li>Nate Hagens - <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-xr9rIQxwj4">The Great Simplification</a><br>- Nifty movie about the predicament, similar to the one above really.</li>
 </ul>
 
-<p>I'm a little depressed.</p>
+<p>I'm a little depressed. 🤷</p>
 
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